
{"id":67,"date":"2023-12-06T19:51:39","date_gmt":"2023-12-06T19:51:39","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/chapter\/chapter-7-basics-of-writing\/"},"modified":"2024-09-30T15:05:35","modified_gmt":"2024-09-30T15:05:35","slug":"chapter-7-basics-of-writing","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/chapter\/chapter-7-basics-of-writing\/","title":{"raw":"Chapter 7: Basics of Writing\u00a0","rendered":"Chapter 7: Basics of Writing\u00a0"},"content":{"raw":"<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div>\n<h2><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">Top of the News Story<\/span><\/h2>\n<span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">The main goal of this textbook is to teach you how to write a hard news story effectively and accurately. We've introduced the tools of ethics, newsworthiness and interviews. Now it's time to start building a story.\u00a0\u00a0<\/span>\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\nWriting in a news style is difficult because it requires simplicity. You should write clear and simple sentences. Every word is important. Every sentence needs only one idea that tells the reader something new and important. The point of news writing is not to impress the reader with your vast vocabulary, but to provide information succinctly and creatively. If you waste words, you lose readers.\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<h3>Nut Graf<\/h3>\n[caption id=\"attachment_63\" align=\"alignnone\" width=\"300\"]<img class=\"size-medium wp-image-63\" src=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/01\/4415406430_7a5ba031bb_o-300x267.jpg\" alt=\"A variety of nuts are piled up, The center nut is a large cashew.\" width=\"300\" height=\"267\"> Always include a nut or summary paragraph near the top of an article.[\/caption]\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\nPerhaps the most important part of any news story is something called the nut paragraph or nut graf. The <strong>nut graf<\/strong>\u00a0is the nut or summary of the story. If the reader sees no other part of the story, the nut graf summarizes the story in general terms.\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\nThe Poytner Institute is a nonprofit founded in 1975 that provides journalism training, information and courses. Its <a href=\"http:\/\/poynter.org\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">website<\/a> features writing tips, including an article on the <a href=\"https:\/\/www.poynter.org\/archive\/2003\/the-nut-graf-part-i\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">nut graf<\/a>.\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\nPoynter trainer Chip Scanlan writes that the \u201cnut graf tells the reader what the writer is up to; it delivers a promise of the story\u2019s content and message. It\u2019s called the nut graf because, like a nut, it contains the 'kernel,' or essential theme, of the story.\u201d\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\nScanlan outlines the purposes of the nut graf:\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<ul>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"13\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"1\" data-aria-level=\"1\">It justifies the story by telling readers why they should care.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"13\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"2\" data-aria-level=\"1\">It provides a transition from the lead and explains the lead and its connection to the rest of the story.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"13\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">It often tells readers why the story is timely.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"13\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"4\" data-aria-level=\"1\">It often includes supporting material that helps readers see why the story is important.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\nScanlan also notes a cardinal rule of the nut graf: Shorter is better. A single paragraph of one to two sentences is standard. Occasionally a story calls for more, but that is rare and saved for complicated stories by advanced writers. San Diego Union-Tribune writer David Garrick wrote an excellent nut graf in an Oct. 15, 2023 story about coyotes.\n<div>\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\n<div>\n\n<em><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">Example: <\/span><\/em>\n\n<em><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">SAN DIEGO \u2014 One woman said her heart nearly stopped recently when she saw a coyote easily jump a 6-foot fence into a neighbor\u2019s Clairemont yard where puppies were playing. Another recently ducked into a side yard in her North Park neighborhood to dodge a coyote walking boldly down Felton Street in broad daylight.\u00a0<\/span><\/em>\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\n<em>These incidents and many similar confrontations with urban coyotes have convinced people in many San Diego neighborhoods that the wild animals have gotten bolder and that more aggressive intervention is needed by state and local wildlife officials.<\/em>\n\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\n<span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">Notice that the story isn\u2019t about one person or neighborhood but a countywide trend on coyotes. Another example of a nut graf is by San Diego Union-Tribune writer Kristen Taketa on Oct. 14, 2023.<\/span>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div>\n\n<em>Example:<\/em>\n\n<em>Parents<span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\"> at several San Diego Unified schools are raising concerns about a routine district process that they say is increasing class sizes and transferring away valued teachers from their children\u2019s classrooms.\u00a0<\/span><\/em>\n\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div>\n\n<em>Forced teacher transfers aren\u2019t unique to San Diego Unified, and the district says they\u2019re necessary to align staffing with declining enrollment. But San Diego parents say it tends to happen so late in the school year that it significantly disrupts students\u2019 learning and emotional well-being.<\/em>\n\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\n<span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">Taketa\u2019s nut graf indicates that this story is about a trend in education.\u00a0<\/span>\n\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div>\n<h2>Body of a News Story<\/h2>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<h3>Inverted Pyramid<\/h3>\n[caption id=\"attachment_64\" align=\"alignnone\" width=\"552\"]<img class=\" wp-image-64\" src=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Inverted-Pyramid-1-300x300.png\" alt=\"A upside down triangle demonstrates the concept of inverted pyramid writing. The text included shows that the most important facts of the story should be placed at the beginning.\" width=\"552\" height=\"552\"> Inverted pyramid is the most common style of news writing.[\/caption]\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\nThe body of a news story is different than an English essay. Instead of an introduction, thesis, research and conclusion, news writing gets straight to the point.\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\nThe main format used in journalism is called the <strong>inverted pyramid<\/strong>. The inverted pyramid format began in 19th-century American journalism, according to an academic paper by Horst P\u00f6ttker published in 2005.\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\nIn an inverted pyramid, the biggest, most important information is at the top of the story, and the information gets less important \u2013 or smaller \u2013 as the story proceeds, making it look like an upside-down triangle. Remember that all the information in a story still should be important. A good reporter often leaves more than half of the reported information out of a story. News stories are concise and culled to include only the information that readers need to know. This format helps support that work.\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\nThe inverted pyramid came about largely because of the printed press and a lack of space in a physical product, according to another analysis of the style, this one by Negrea Petru-Cristian. Petru-Cristian writes: \u201cIn printed press \u2013 or any type of paper-based writings \u2013 there is the issue of how much one can write on a paper and what to put there. In a sense, there is a limit of what you can do with the text and how to organise everything matters.\u201d\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\nBy putting the most important facts first, if a newspaper ran out of space on the physical page, the editor (who was likely on deadline) could simply cut the bottom of the story and send the page to the printer with the knowledge that the best information was still there.\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\nEven without the constraints of the printed page, the form has remained. It makes sense. There may be an infinite amount of space on a website, but readers don\u2019t have an infinite amount of patience. They could stop reading at any time, so this structure makes sure they don\u2019t miss the good stuff.\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<h3><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">Narrative Format\u00a0<\/span><\/h3>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\n<span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">I was a feature writer for a decade but struggle to explain narrative writing to journalism students. It feels like a style of writing that should be saved for fiction. Poynter struggled with it as well, as Scanlan points out in a 2003 post titled \u201cWhat is <\/span><a style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\" href=\"https:\/\/www.poynter.org\/reporting-editing\/2003\/what-is-narrative-anyway\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Narrative<\/a><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">, Anyway?\u201d\u00a0<\/span>\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\nScanlan puts on his reporter hat and asks his colleagues, who observe that the storytelling component of fiction can keep news readers engaged.\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\nWade Rawlins, of the Raleigh News &amp; Observer, tells Scanlan that \u201cnarrative is the dirt path that leads us through the impenetrable forest, so we move forward and don\u2019t feel lost.\u201d\n<div>\n\nJoel Rawson, the executive editor of the Providence Journal, tells Scanlan that narrative writing in journalism uses the following tools:\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<ul>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"18\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"1\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Character where a person is revealed or changed<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"18\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"2\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Scenes described where action occurs<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"18\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Time elements including flashbacks<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"18\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Technique of descriptive writing and dialogue<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"18\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Purpose or theme<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\n<span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">After writing about his struggles with narrative in journalism, Scanlan sums up <strong>narrative<\/strong>\u00a0writing well.\u00a0<\/span>\n\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div>\n\n\u201cStorytelling journalism employs the techniques of fiction: point of view; time; scene (which includes setting, characters, dialogue); and narrative,\u201d he writes. \u201cYet it remains true to the tenets of journalism: accuracy; honesty; integrity of intentions.\u201d\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<h3>Hourglass Style<\/h3>\n[caption id=\"attachment_65\" align=\"alignnone\" width=\"466\"]<img class=\" wp-image-65\" src=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Hourglass-Style-300x300.png\" alt=\"The Hourglass Style of writing includes an upside triangle called Inverted Pyramid that sits upon a rectangle called the turn. The bottom is a regular triangle that connotes the narrative style of writing.\" width=\"466\" height=\"466\"> This style works well in feature stories.[\/caption]\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\nThe inverted pyramid is the main format used in beginning journalism, but it's worth mentioning others that can be used in news and feature stories.\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\nThe <strong>hourglass structure <\/strong>was named by Poynter author Roy Peter Clark in 1983 after he noticed that reporters were combining two forms: the inverted pyramid and the narrative, according to Scanlan in a 2003 Poynter <a href=\"https:\/\/www.poynter.org\/reporting-editing\/2003\/the-hourglass-serving-the-news-serving-the-reader\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">article<\/a>.\n<div>\n\nThe hourglass story is divided into three parts:\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<ol>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"%1.\" data-font=\"Calibri\" data-listid=\"15\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:0,&quot;335559684&quot;:-1,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769242&quot;:[65533,0],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;%1.&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"1\" data-aria-level=\"1\">The top includes a summary lead and three or four paragraphs that \u201canswer the reader\u2019s most pressing questions,\u201d Scanlan writes.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"%1.\" data-font=\"Calibri\" data-listid=\"15\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:0,&quot;335559684&quot;:-1,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769242&quot;:[65533,0],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;%1.&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"1\" data-aria-level=\"1\">The turn is where the story turns from an inverted pyramid to a chronological narrative. It often includes transitional phrases such as: according to police, witnesses said, students and faculty agree, etc.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"%1.\" data-font=\"Calibri\" data-listid=\"15\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:0,&quot;335559684&quot;:-1,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769242&quot;:[65533,0],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;%1.&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"1\" data-aria-level=\"1\">The narrative is the ending that \"allows the writer to tell a chronological narrative complete with detail, dialogue and background information,\u201d Scanlan writes.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<h3>Five-Box Technique<\/h3>\n[caption id=\"attachment_66\" align=\"alignnone\" width=\"320\"]<img class=\" wp-image-66\" src=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Add-a-heading-120x300.png\" alt=\"This style of writing is five boxes sitting on top of each other. The first box draw readers to the story The second box is the summary of the story. The third box has new facts lead to the narrative. The fourth box finishes the narrative The fifth box ends with a quote.\" width=\"320\" height=\"801\"> This news writing style helps develop a strong story outline.[\/caption]\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\nPoytner\u2019s Scanlan also examined a writing format that helps new writers. Though he wrote about it in <a href=\"https:\/\/www.poynter.org\/reporting-editing\/2002\/helping-writers-take-charge-five-tools-for-editors-5\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">2002<\/a>, the techniques still work today.\n<div>\n\nScanlan wrote that Pulitzer Prize winner Rick Bragg of the New York Times used a five-box technique for his news stories instead of an outline.\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<ul>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"17\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">The first box is the lead to draw readers into the story<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"17\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"4\" data-aria-level=\"1\">The second box is the nut graf or summary of the story<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"17\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"5\" data-aria-level=\"1\">The third box has new facts that sound like the lead and marks a transition to the narrative part of the story.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"17\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"6\" data-aria-level=\"1\">The fourth box finishes the narrative<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"17\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"7\" data-aria-level=\"1\">The fifth box ends with a quote or image that leaves the reader with a strong emotion.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<h2><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">End of a News Story<\/span><\/h2>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n\nPeople new to news writing are tempted to reiterate the best facts of their story in a summary ending. Resist this temptation to draw a conclusion or add your own thoughts to the story. Remember: This is an objective news story composed of verified facts derived from reporting and research. Even the last paragraph should tell readers something they don't know. The ending of a news story is often called the <strong>kicker<\/strong>.\n\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<h3>There are four standard ways to end a news story:<\/h3>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<h4>Quote<\/h4>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n\nYour second-best quote is often an effective way to end a story. Your best quote should be the first one in your story. But if there is another great quote that summarizes or complements the story angle, save it for the end. Here is the lead and end of a Oct. 17, 2023 article by Julia Jacobs of the New York Times.\n\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n\n<em>Example:<\/em>\n\n<em>Lead: Prosecutors will convene a grand jury to consider whether to refile an involuntary manslaughter charge against Alec Baldwin in the fatal shooting of a cinematographer who was killed on the set of the film \u201cRust\u201d in 2021, New Mexico prosecutors said on Tuesday.<\/em>\n\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n\n<em>Kicker: \u201cSomeone put a live bullet in a gun, a bullet that wasn\u2019t even supposed to be on the property,\u201d Mr. Baldwin said in a television interview just over a month after the tragedy. \u201cSomeone is responsible for what happened, and I can\u2019t say who that is, but I know it\u2019s not me.\u201d<\/em>\n\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<h4>Startling Fact<\/h4>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n\nIf you have good research or statistics that are not used at the top of a story, consider ending with them. Strengthening the story with more facts is an excellent way to wrap it up, as seen in this Dec. 1, 2023 example from the New York Times.\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n\n<em>Example:<\/em>\n\n<em>Lead<span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">: The expulsion of George Santos from Congress on Friday swept away one major political headache for Republicans, but it immediately set the stage for another: The party will have to defend his vulnerable seat in a special election early next year.\u00a0<\/span><\/em>\n\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n\n<em>Kicker: Mr. Santos himself could theoretically run for the seat as an independent. But the task would be arduous and might jeopardize a more urgent priority: fighting charges that could put him in prison for up to 22 years.<\/em>\n\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<h4><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">Return to the Top<\/span><\/h4>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n\nConsider returning to your lead to wrap up a news story. Some reporters begin with an anecdotal lead and conclude the mini-story at the end of the main story. It helps the reader feel some resolution to the problem introduced in the lead. This type of ending is used in an Oct. 17, 2023 article by Rukmini Callimachi of the New York Times.\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n\n<em><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">Example:<\/span><\/em>\n\n<em><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">Lead: Chrystal Audet tried to get comfortable in what she called her \u201cbedroom\u201d \u2014 the back seat of her eight-year-old Ford Fusion. To stretch her legs, she had to leave a passenger door ajar, but September nights are raw in the Pacific Northwest, with sheets of rain that cut to the bone.\u00a0<\/span><\/em>\n\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n\n<em>From her own \u201cbedroom\u201d in the front seat, her 26-year-old daughter Cierra Audet asked her to close it.<\/em>\n\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n\n<em>Kicker: Ms. Audet and her daughter moved in on Sept. 23. For now she is relishing the simplest of human pleasures \u2014 the ability to drink as much water as she wants, to take a shower in a space that is fully hers and to stretch out when she sleeps. Her tennis shoes fit again. Yet the math of her life remains precarious. Her sizable debt continues to carve out her salary, leaving too little for rent.<\/em>\n\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n\n<em>\u201cI\u2019m always, like, on the edge,\u201d said Ms. Audet. \u201cAt least I have a car to sit in \u2014 and a safe parking lot to be in.\u201d<\/em>\n\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div>\n<h4>Future<\/h4>\nTelling the reader what's next is another way to wrap up a story. If a school board voted on new school buses at a meeting, a reporter can end the story by informing the reader when the buses might appear on the street. Consider this example from an Oct. 10, 2023 article by Maxine Joselow of the Washington Post.\n<div>\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\n<div>\n\n<em><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">Example:<\/span><\/em>\n\n<em><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">Kicker: At the negotiations in Nairobi, which are scheduled for Oct. 23 through Oct. 27, Hillbrand said he expects officials to begin reevaluating the protocol\u2019s exemption for feedstocks, a topic that made it onto the official agenda.\u00a0<\/span><\/em>\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\n<em>\u201cIt\u2019s a potential next frontier for the protocol,\u201d he said.<\/em>\n\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<h2><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">News Writing Tips\u00a0<\/span><\/h2>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n\nThere are a few common news writing mistakes to consider before you turn in your first news story to your editor or professor.\n\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<ul>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"1\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Proofread your story at least three times. Yes, it feels daunting. Yes, it is necessary to catch errors.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"2\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Reread your story another time with the sole purpose of trying to remove one unnecessary word from every sentence. Concise writing helps readers.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Keep yourself out of it. A news story does not need the phrases \u201cI interviewed\u201d or \u201ctalked to a reporter.\" Keep the story focused on facts and sources. Reporters should be neutral and objective, from outside the story looking in.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"4\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Sentences should be short with one idea each. Cut lengthy sentences in half.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"5\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Paragraphs should be short, no more than one or two sentences.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"6\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Quotes should be their own paragraphs.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"7\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Check the spellings and titles of every source.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"8\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Check quote accuracy.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"9\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Make sure the news story is objective and balanced. The reader should not be able to tell what you think. Nor should they hear from only one side. Instead, provide the reader with all sides of the story and let them decide.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"10\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Outline your story again after you write it. Make sure the story has a discernible outline and transitions so your reader will not feel lost.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"11\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Search for problem words such as \u201cjust\u201d and \u201cvery\u201d and \u201cunique,\u201d which add subjectivity to an objective story. Delete them.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"12\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Check your attribution. Make sure all but the most obvious facts are paired with attribution.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"13\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Make sure your lead sentence starts with the latest information, not the date, time or attribution.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div>\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--key-takeaways\"><header class=\"textbox__header\">\n<p class=\"textbox__title\">Key Takeaways<\/p>\n\n<\/header>\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\n<div>\n<ul>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"1\" data-aria-level=\"1\">The nut paragraph, or graf, is the nut or summary of the story. It summarizes the overall story in general terms.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"2\" data-aria-level=\"1\">When writing a news story, the best format is called the inverted pyramid. This calls for putting the most important information at the top and filling in the rest in descending order.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Other writing formats to consider include:\n<ul>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">narrative writing, with storytelling elements like what you would find in a fiction book.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">the hourglass structure, which combines the inverted pyramid and narrative forms.<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">the five-box technique, which helps you outline news stories by filling in boxes before writing.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n \t<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Ending a news story is not like the conclusion of an academic essay. Instead of recapping, use a new quote or statistic or revisit the lead. A story also can end on what might happen in the future.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--exercises\"><header class=\"textbox__header\">\n<p class=\"textbox__title\">Chapter Exercise<\/p>\n\n<\/header>\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\n\nVisit the San Diego mayor's <a href=\"https:\/\/www.sandiego.gov\/mayor\/news-room\/press-releases\">website<\/a> and pick a press release. Using the information from the press release, write a news story in the inverted pyramid format. It should be at least 300 words. Note that press releases also are often written using inverted pyramid, but are not objective. Your story should be objective and rewritten. It should have a concise and interesting lead and nut graf. You can use quotes from the press release. Don't forget to proofread your story.\n\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n&nbsp;\n\n<\/div>\n<\/div>","rendered":"<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div>\n<h2><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">Top of the News Story<\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">The main goal of this textbook is to teach you how to write a hard news story effectively and accurately. We&#8217;ve introduced the tools of ethics, newsworthiness and interviews. Now it&#8217;s time to start building a story.\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p>Writing in a news style is difficult because it requires simplicity. You should write clear and simple sentences. Every word is important. Every sentence needs only one idea that tells the reader something new and important. The point of news writing is not to impress the reader with your vast vocabulary, but to provide information succinctly and creatively. If you waste words, you lose readers.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<h3>Nut Graf<\/h3>\n<figure id=\"attachment_63\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-63\" style=\"width: 300px\" class=\"wp-caption alignnone\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-63\" src=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/01\/4415406430_7a5ba031bb_o-300x267.jpg\" alt=\"A variety of nuts are piled up, The center nut is a large cashew.\" width=\"300\" height=\"267\" srcset=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/01\/4415406430_7a5ba031bb_o-300x267.jpg 300w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/01\/4415406430_7a5ba031bb_o-1024x910.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/01\/4415406430_7a5ba031bb_o-768x683.jpg 768w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/01\/4415406430_7a5ba031bb_o-65x58.jpg 65w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/01\/4415406430_7a5ba031bb_o-225x200.jpg 225w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/01\/4415406430_7a5ba031bb_o-350x311.jpg 350w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/01\/4415406430_7a5ba031bb_o.jpg 1125w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-63\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Always include a nut or summary paragraph near the top of an article.<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p>Perhaps the most important part of any news story is something called the nut paragraph or nut graf. The <strong>nut graf<\/strong>\u00a0is the nut or summary of the story. If the reader sees no other part of the story, the nut graf summarizes the story in general terms.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p>The Poytner Institute is a nonprofit founded in 1975 that provides journalism training, information and courses. Its <a href=\"http:\/\/poynter.org\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">website<\/a> features writing tips, including an article on the <a href=\"https:\/\/www.poynter.org\/archive\/2003\/the-nut-graf-part-i\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">nut graf<\/a>.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p>Poynter trainer Chip Scanlan writes that the \u201cnut graf tells the reader what the writer is up to; it delivers a promise of the story\u2019s content and message. It\u2019s called the nut graf because, like a nut, it contains the &#8216;kernel,&#8217; or essential theme, of the story.\u201d<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p>Scanlan outlines the purposes of the nut graf:<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<ul>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"13\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"1\" data-aria-level=\"1\">It justifies the story by telling readers why they should care.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"13\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"2\" data-aria-level=\"1\">It provides a transition from the lead and explains the lead and its connection to the rest of the story.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"13\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">It often tells readers why the story is timely.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"13\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"4\" data-aria-level=\"1\">It often includes supporting material that helps readers see why the story is important.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p>Scanlan also notes a cardinal rule of the nut graf: Shorter is better. A single paragraph of one to two sentences is standard. Occasionally a story calls for more, but that is rare and saved for complicated stories by advanced writers. San Diego Union-Tribune writer David Garrick wrote an excellent nut graf in an Oct. 15, 2023 story about coyotes.<\/p>\n<div>\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\n<div>\n<p><em><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">Example: <\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><em><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">SAN DIEGO \u2014 One woman said her heart nearly stopped recently when she saw a coyote easily jump a 6-foot fence into a neighbor\u2019s Clairemont yard where puppies were playing. Another recently ducked into a side yard in her North Park neighborhood to dodge a coyote walking boldly down Felton Street in broad daylight.\u00a0<\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p><em>These incidents and many similar confrontations with urban coyotes have convinced people in many San Diego neighborhoods that the wild animals have gotten bolder and that more aggressive intervention is needed by state and local wildlife officials.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">Notice that the story isn\u2019t about one person or neighborhood but a countywide trend on coyotes. Another example of a nut graf is by San Diego Union-Tribune writer Kristen Taketa on Oct. 14, 2023.<\/span><\/p>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div>\n<p><em>Example:<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>Parents<span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\"> at several San Diego Unified schools are raising concerns about a routine district process that they say is increasing class sizes and transferring away valued teachers from their children\u2019s classrooms.\u00a0<\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div>\n<p><em>Forced teacher transfers aren\u2019t unique to San Diego Unified, and the district says they\u2019re necessary to align staffing with declining enrollment. But San Diego parents say it tends to happen so late in the school year that it significantly disrupts students\u2019 learning and emotional well-being.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">Taketa\u2019s nut graf indicates that this story is about a trend in education.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div>\n<h2>Body of a News Story<\/h2>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<h3>Inverted Pyramid<\/h3>\n<figure id=\"attachment_64\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-64\" style=\"width: 552px\" class=\"wp-caption alignnone\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-64\" src=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Inverted-Pyramid-1-300x300.png\" alt=\"A upside down triangle demonstrates the concept of inverted pyramid writing. The text included shows that the most important facts of the story should be placed at the beginning.\" width=\"552\" height=\"552\" srcset=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Inverted-Pyramid-1-300x300.png 300w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Inverted-Pyramid-1-1024x1024.png 1024w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Inverted-Pyramid-1-150x150.png 150w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Inverted-Pyramid-1-768x768.png 768w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Inverted-Pyramid-1-65x65.png 65w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Inverted-Pyramid-1-225x225.png 225w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Inverted-Pyramid-1-350x350.png 350w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Inverted-Pyramid-1.png 1080w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 552px) 100vw, 552px\" \/><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-64\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Inverted pyramid is the most common style of news writing.<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p>The body of a news story is different than an English essay. Instead of an introduction, thesis, research and conclusion, news writing gets straight to the point.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p>The main format used in journalism is called the <strong>inverted pyramid<\/strong>. The inverted pyramid format began in 19th-century American journalism, according to an academic paper by Horst P\u00f6ttker published in 2005.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p>In an inverted pyramid, the biggest, most important information is at the top of the story, and the information gets less important \u2013 or smaller \u2013 as the story proceeds, making it look like an upside-down triangle. Remember that all the information in a story still should be important. A good reporter often leaves more than half of the reported information out of a story. News stories are concise and culled to include only the information that readers need to know. This format helps support that work.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p>The inverted pyramid came about largely because of the printed press and a lack of space in a physical product, according to another analysis of the style, this one by Negrea Petru-Cristian. Petru-Cristian writes: \u201cIn printed press \u2013 or any type of paper-based writings \u2013 there is the issue of how much one can write on a paper and what to put there. In a sense, there is a limit of what you can do with the text and how to organise everything matters.\u201d<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p>By putting the most important facts first, if a newspaper ran out of space on the physical page, the editor (who was likely on deadline) could simply cut the bottom of the story and send the page to the printer with the knowledge that the best information was still there.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p>Even without the constraints of the printed page, the form has remained. It makes sense. There may be an infinite amount of space on a website, but readers don\u2019t have an infinite amount of patience. They could stop reading at any time, so this structure makes sure they don\u2019t miss the good stuff.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<h3><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">Narrative Format\u00a0<\/span><\/h3>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">I was a feature writer for a decade but struggle to explain narrative writing to journalism students. It feels like a style of writing that should be saved for fiction. Poynter struggled with it as well, as Scanlan points out in a 2003 post titled \u201cWhat is <\/span><a style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\" href=\"https:\/\/www.poynter.org\/reporting-editing\/2003\/what-is-narrative-anyway\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Narrative<\/a><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">, Anyway?\u201d\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p>Scanlan puts on his reporter hat and asks his colleagues, who observe that the storytelling component of fiction can keep news readers engaged.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p>Wade Rawlins, of the Raleigh News &amp; Observer, tells Scanlan that \u201cnarrative is the dirt path that leads us through the impenetrable forest, so we move forward and don\u2019t feel lost.\u201d<\/p>\n<div>\n<p>Joel Rawson, the executive editor of the Providence Journal, tells Scanlan that narrative writing in journalism uses the following tools:<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<ul>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"18\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"1\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Character where a person is revealed or changed<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"18\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"2\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Scenes described where action occurs<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"18\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Time elements including flashbacks<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"18\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Technique of descriptive writing and dialogue<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"18\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Purpose or theme<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">After writing about his struggles with narrative in journalism, Scanlan sums up <strong>narrative<\/strong>\u00a0writing well.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div>\n<p>\u201cStorytelling journalism employs the techniques of fiction: point of view; time; scene (which includes setting, characters, dialogue); and narrative,\u201d he writes. \u201cYet it remains true to the tenets of journalism: accuracy; honesty; integrity of intentions.\u201d<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<h3>Hourglass Style<\/h3>\n<figure id=\"attachment_65\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-65\" style=\"width: 466px\" class=\"wp-caption alignnone\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-65\" src=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Hourglass-Style-300x300.png\" alt=\"The Hourglass Style of writing includes an upside triangle called Inverted Pyramid that sits upon a rectangle called the turn. The bottom is a regular triangle that connotes the narrative style of writing.\" width=\"466\" height=\"466\" srcset=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Hourglass-Style-300x300.png 300w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Hourglass-Style-1024x1024.png 1024w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Hourglass-Style-150x150.png 150w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Hourglass-Style-768x768.png 768w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Hourglass-Style-65x65.png 65w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Hourglass-Style-225x225.png 225w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Hourglass-Style-350x350.png 350w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Hourglass-Style.png 1080w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 466px) 100vw, 466px\" \/><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-65\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">This style works well in feature stories.<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p>The inverted pyramid is the main format used in beginning journalism, but it&#8217;s worth mentioning others that can be used in news and feature stories.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p>The <strong>hourglass structure <\/strong>was named by Poynter author Roy Peter Clark in 1983 after he noticed that reporters were combining two forms: the inverted pyramid and the narrative, according to Scanlan in a 2003 Poynter <a href=\"https:\/\/www.poynter.org\/reporting-editing\/2003\/the-hourglass-serving-the-news-serving-the-reader\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">article<\/a>.<\/p>\n<div>\n<p>The hourglass story is divided into three parts:<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<ol>\n<li data-leveltext=\"%1.\" data-font=\"Calibri\" data-listid=\"15\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:0,&quot;335559684&quot;:-1,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769242&quot;:[65533,0],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;%1.&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"1\" data-aria-level=\"1\">The top includes a summary lead and three or four paragraphs that \u201canswer the reader\u2019s most pressing questions,\u201d Scanlan writes.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"%1.\" data-font=\"Calibri\" data-listid=\"15\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:0,&quot;335559684&quot;:-1,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769242&quot;:[65533,0],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;%1.&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"1\" data-aria-level=\"1\">The turn is where the story turns from an inverted pyramid to a chronological narrative. It often includes transitional phrases such as: according to police, witnesses said, students and faculty agree, etc.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"%1.\" data-font=\"Calibri\" data-listid=\"15\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:0,&quot;335559684&quot;:-1,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769242&quot;:[65533,0],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;%1.&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"1\" data-aria-level=\"1\">The narrative is the ending that &#8220;allows the writer to tell a chronological narrative complete with detail, dialogue and background information,\u201d Scanlan writes.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<h3>Five-Box Technique<\/h3>\n<figure id=\"attachment_66\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-66\" style=\"width: 320px\" class=\"wp-caption alignnone\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-66\" src=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Add-a-heading-120x300.png\" alt=\"This style of writing is five boxes sitting on top of each other. The first box draw readers to the story The second box is the summary of the story. The third box has new facts lead to the narrative. The fourth box finishes the narrative The fifth box ends with a quote.\" width=\"320\" height=\"801\" srcset=\"https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Add-a-heading-120x300.png 120w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Add-a-heading-768x1920.png 768w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Add-a-heading-614x1536.png 614w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Add-a-heading-65x163.png 65w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Add-a-heading-225x563.png 225w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Add-a-heading-350x875.png 350w, https:\/\/pressbooks.palomar.edu\/introtojournalism\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/3\/2024\/09\/Add-a-heading.png 800w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 320px) 100vw, 320px\" \/><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-66\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">This news writing style helps develop a strong story outline.<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p>Poytner\u2019s Scanlan also examined a writing format that helps new writers. Though he wrote about it in <a href=\"https:\/\/www.poynter.org\/reporting-editing\/2002\/helping-writers-take-charge-five-tools-for-editors-5\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">2002<\/a>, the techniques still work today.<\/p>\n<div>\n<p>Scanlan wrote that Pulitzer Prize winner Rick Bragg of the New York Times used a five-box technique for his news stories instead of an outline.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<ul>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"17\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">The first box is the lead to draw readers into the story<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"17\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"4\" data-aria-level=\"1\">The second box is the nut graf or summary of the story<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"17\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"5\" data-aria-level=\"1\">The third box has new facts that sound like the lead and marks a transition to the narrative part of the story.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"17\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"6\" data-aria-level=\"1\">The fourth box finishes the narrative<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"17\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"7\" data-aria-level=\"1\">The fifth box ends with a quote or image that leaves the reader with a strong emotion.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<h2><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">End of a News Story<\/span><\/h2>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<p>People new to news writing are tempted to reiterate the best facts of their story in a summary ending. Resist this temptation to draw a conclusion or add your own thoughts to the story. Remember: This is an objective news story composed of verified facts derived from reporting and research. Even the last paragraph should tell readers something they don&#8217;t know. The ending of a news story is often called the <strong>kicker<\/strong>.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<h3>There are four standard ways to end a news story:<\/h3>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<h4>Quote<\/h4>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<p>Your second-best quote is often an effective way to end a story. Your best quote should be the first one in your story. But if there is another great quote that summarizes or complements the story angle, save it for the end. Here is the lead and end of a Oct. 17, 2023 article by Julia Jacobs of the New York Times.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<p><em>Example:<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>Lead: Prosecutors will convene a grand jury to consider whether to refile an involuntary manslaughter charge against Alec Baldwin in the fatal shooting of a cinematographer who was killed on the set of the film \u201cRust\u201d in 2021, New Mexico prosecutors said on Tuesday.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<p><em>Kicker: \u201cSomeone put a live bullet in a gun, a bullet that wasn\u2019t even supposed to be on the property,\u201d Mr. Baldwin said in a television interview just over a month after the tragedy. \u201cSomeone is responsible for what happened, and I can\u2019t say who that is, but I know it\u2019s not me.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<h4>Startling Fact<\/h4>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<p>If you have good research or statistics that are not used at the top of a story, consider ending with them. Strengthening the story with more facts is an excellent way to wrap it up, as seen in this Dec. 1, 2023 example from the New York Times.<\/p>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<p><em>Example:<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>Lead<span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">: The expulsion of George Santos from Congress on Friday swept away one major political headache for Republicans, but it immediately set the stage for another: The party will have to defend his vulnerable seat in a special election early next year.\u00a0<\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<p><em>Kicker: Mr. Santos himself could theoretically run for the seat as an independent. But the task would be arduous and might jeopardize a more urgent priority: fighting charges that could put him in prison for up to 22 years.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<h4><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">Return to the Top<\/span><\/h4>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<p>Consider returning to your lead to wrap up a news story. Some reporters begin with an anecdotal lead and conclude the mini-story at the end of the main story. It helps the reader feel some resolution to the problem introduced in the lead. This type of ending is used in an Oct. 17, 2023 article by Rukmini Callimachi of the New York Times.<\/p>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<p><em><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">Example:<\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><em><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">Lead: Chrystal Audet tried to get comfortable in what she called her \u201cbedroom\u201d \u2014 the back seat of her eight-year-old Ford Fusion. To stretch her legs, she had to leave a passenger door ajar, but September nights are raw in the Pacific Northwest, with sheets of rain that cut to the bone.\u00a0<\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<p><em>From her own \u201cbedroom\u201d in the front seat, her 26-year-old daughter Cierra Audet asked her to close it.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<p><em>Kicker: Ms. Audet and her daughter moved in on Sept. 23. For now she is relishing the simplest of human pleasures \u2014 the ability to drink as much water as she wants, to take a shower in a space that is fully hers and to stretch out when she sleeps. Her tennis shoes fit again. Yet the math of her life remains precarious. Her sizable debt continues to carve out her salary, leaving too little for rent.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<p><em>\u201cI\u2019m always, like, on the edge,\u201d said Ms. Audet. \u201cAt least I have a car to sit in \u2014 and a safe parking lot to be in.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div>\n<h4>Future<\/h4>\n<p>Telling the reader what&#8217;s next is another way to wrap up a story. If a school board voted on new school buses at a meeting, a reporter can end the story by informing the reader when the buses might appear on the street. Consider this example from an Oct. 10, 2023 article by Maxine Joselow of the Washington Post.<\/p>\n<div>\n<div class=\"textbox shaded\">\n<div>\n<p><em><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">Example:<\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><em><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">Kicker: At the negotiations in Nairobi, which are scheduled for Oct. 23 through Oct. 27, Hillbrand said he expects officials to begin reevaluating the protocol\u2019s exemption for feedstocks, a topic that made it onto the official agenda.\u00a0<\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p><em>\u201cIt\u2019s a potential next frontier for the protocol,\u201d he said.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<h2><span style=\"text-align: initial;font-size: 1em\">News Writing Tips\u00a0<\/span><\/h2>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p>There are a few common news writing mistakes to consider before you turn in your first news story to your editor or professor.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<ul>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"1\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Proofread your story at least three times. Yes, it feels daunting. Yes, it is necessary to catch errors.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"2\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Reread your story another time with the sole purpose of trying to remove one unnecessary word from every sentence. Concise writing helps readers.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Keep yourself out of it. A news story does not need the phrases \u201cI interviewed\u201d or \u201ctalked to a reporter.&#8221; Keep the story focused on facts and sources. Reporters should be neutral and objective, from outside the story looking in.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"4\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Sentences should be short with one idea each. Cut lengthy sentences in half.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"5\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Paragraphs should be short, no more than one or two sentences.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"6\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Quotes should be their own paragraphs.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"7\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Check the spellings and titles of every source.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"8\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Check quote accuracy.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"9\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Make sure the news story is objective and balanced. The reader should not be able to tell what you think. Nor should they hear from only one side. Instead, provide the reader with all sides of the story and let them decide.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"10\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Outline your story again after you write it. Make sure the story has a discernible outline and transitions so your reader will not feel lost.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"11\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Search for problem words such as \u201cjust\u201d and \u201cvery\u201d and \u201cunique,\u201d which add subjectivity to an objective story. Delete them.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"12\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Check your attribution. Make sure all but the most obvious facts are paired with attribution.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"13\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Make sure your lead sentence starts with the latest information, not the date, time or attribution.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div style=\"font-weight: 400\">\n<div>\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--key-takeaways\">\n<header class=\"textbox__header\">\n<p class=\"textbox__title\">Key Takeaways<\/p>\n<\/header>\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\n<div>\n<ul>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"1\" data-aria-level=\"1\">The nut paragraph, or graf, is the nut or summary of the story. It summarizes the overall story in general terms.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"2\" data-aria-level=\"1\">When writing a news story, the best format is called the inverted pyramid. This calls for putting the most important information at the top and filling in the rest in descending order.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Other writing formats to consider include:\n<ul>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">narrative writing, with storytelling elements like what you would find in a fiction book.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">the hourglass structure, which combines the inverted pyramid and narrative forms.<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">the five-box technique, which helps you outline news stories by filling in boxes before writing.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<li data-leveltext=\"\uf0b7\" data-font=\"Symbol\" data-listid=\"14\" data-list-defn-props=\"{&quot;335552541&quot;:1,&quot;335559684&quot;:-2,&quot;335559685&quot;:720,&quot;335559991&quot;:360,&quot;469769226&quot;:&quot;Symbol&quot;,&quot;469769242&quot;:[8226],&quot;469777803&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;469777804&quot;:&quot;\uf0b7&quot;,&quot;469777815&quot;:&quot;hybridMultilevel&quot;}\" data-aria-posinset=\"3\" data-aria-level=\"1\">Ending a news story is not like the conclusion of an academic essay. Instead of recapping, use a new quote or statistic or revisit the lead. A story also can end on what might happen in the future.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--exercises\">\n<header class=\"textbox__header\">\n<p class=\"textbox__title\">Chapter Exercise<\/p>\n<\/header>\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\n<p>Visit the San Diego mayor&#8217;s <a href=\"https:\/\/www.sandiego.gov\/mayor\/news-room\/press-releases\">website<\/a> and pick a press release. Using the information from the press release, write a news story in the inverted pyramid format. It should be at least 300 words. Note that press releases also are often written using inverted pyramid, but are not objective. Your story should be objective and rewritten. It should have a concise and interesting lead and nut graf. You can use quotes from the press release. 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